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Dying A Thousand Deaths by ~simplecharlotte:iconsimplecharlotte:





Death eats at my limp wrists

Following you into your own abyss

But you don't care that this is a mess

I'm standing here alone, dying a thousand deaths

I wish we were how it used to be

But  you just seem to walk through me

You're stuck in your own world

Not knowing that this one girl

Is dying a thousand deaths

I see you after an eternity

There you are, so innocent and free

And yet it seems like you don't notice me

I focus on you, never blinking

Fixated on you, and only thinking

You're just like the rest

But saying your the best

Now I'm dying a thousand deaths

For you, darling, I wish you luck

With love and life and all of the above

I'll say Goodbye to you one last time

And to remember us when we were in our prime

I'll make sure you're the last thing I see

When the trigger gets pulled, just think of me

Think of the times I thought I knew

How you said you loved me so, its not true

Now that I'm gone

You should know

My love for you will still burn on

Burn like a flame caught in my chest

Because now I've died one thousand deaths.
©2006-2009 ~simplecharlotte
:iconsimplecharlotte:

Author's Comments

A poem that I wrote. Inspired by Bjorn and other events. He said "dying a thousand deaths" and that was a sudden, but random, burst of inspiration.
This took about an hour to make.

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:iconsweetcharlotte:
WOW to the most amazing depth possible
mary, this is......
is...beautiful, amazing, and i am going to make sure this poem will never be forgotten....
seriously, this is freaking beautiful. WOW.

i love it

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live like a wild stallion...FREE.
:iconsimplecharlotte:
hehehe THANK YOU!!!

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Cuz I swear, I'd burn the city down to show you the lights.
:iconsweetcharlotte:
you are welcommeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! :-)

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live like a wild stallion...FREE.
:icondiane-butler:
This is AMAZING! You're definitely a natural poet, and now I feel inferior working on a poem with you :XD:

I have to fav this.

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u lag irl
:iconsimplecharlotte:
Thank you for the favorite :+favlove:And the comment, I feel very loved. :love:

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Cuz I swear, I'd burn the city down to show you the lights.
:iconsimplecharlotte:
*huggles* *lovvles* *any kind of happy word you can put 'les' after*

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Oh, how wrong we were to think that immortality meant never dying.

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27% of kids brag about not trying pot in their signatures. If you're one of the 73% that doesn't give a crap...



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